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Ext. Home - day

Background to credits:

Sunny summer day. MICHAEL Dolan McCarthy, a biracial teenage boy, almost fourteen in this scene, wearing a too-big Sacramento State Sweatshirt, and SWEDE Johnson, his blonde, blue-eyed Swedish-American step-father, check the oil on an old Explorer in the driveway of a small but well-kept house in a pretty neighborhood in Sacramento, California. There are a lawn and beds of flowers. It is obvious the man and boy have a loving, close relationship. Swede closes the hood and nods for Michael to get into the passenger seat.

TRACKING SHOT: They drive to a deserted open gravel field.

Ext. Gravel field - day

The car stops and they switch places. Michael is practically dancing as he comes around the car. He stalls it out and we hear Swede distantly, giving a driving lesson.

SWEDE (O.S.)

That's okay. Take off the parking brake this time. Then ease off the clutch, same as in the driveway.

Michael gets it right second try. As he drives around the gravel field, muted directions and exclamations of glee are heard as Swede has him deliberately skid and correct. Michael does well. They're both having fun.

dISSOLVE TO:

Int. ford explorer - day

Parked in the gravel field. Swede in the driver's seat. Michael grins widely, not noticing Swede's tension.

MiCHAEL

I can't believe you let me do that! You always said I had to wait until I got my permit.

SwEDE

Your mother can teach you to drive on the road, but I wanted to make sure you know how to handle a car if things go wrong.

MICHAEL

You're going to let Mama teach me to drive on the road?

SWEDE

Well, Michael, we don't have much choice about that.

MICHAEL

What do you mean?

SWEDE

You know that nasty old mole the doctor took off my neck?

MICHAEL

Yeah?

SWEDE

It was cancer, Michael. I've only got a few weeks to teach you everything I wanted to...

Michael stares away from Swede, stunned, then tears start to flow while his body and face reflect anger.

MICHAEL

No. They've got to have that wrong.

SWEDE

I wouldn't tell you if there was any doubt. You know that, Michael.

MICHAEL

I've already lost one father!

Swede reaches over and holds Michael awkwardly over the gearshift. Michael grabs him tightly and sobs.

MicHAEL (CONT'D)

It's not fair.

SWEDE

No, it's not. Go ahead and cry, let it all out and be done with it.

A few moments, then Michael pulls away, blinks back tears.

MICHAEL

You've been the best.

Swede blinks back his own tears and nods. Both look forward.

SWEDE

I'm depending on you to be strong for your mama. She'll need your help with the kids.

Michael sits up straight.

MICHAEL

I will. I promise.

They exchange a loving glance. Swede starts the car.

SWEDE

Tough times make you stronger, Michael, as long as you don't lie around feeling sorry for yourself.

MICHAEL

It still sucks, though.

SWEDE

You'll do fine.

diSSOLVE TO:

Ext. Apartment - day

Gray northern California winter day, threatening rain. A rental moving van sits in front of an apartment building, gray on gray concrete. Not the worst part of town, but run down rental houses along with the apartments. One house looks nicer than the others: fresh paint, grass inside the tiny fenced yard, bushes that promise flowers.

LYNN, Michael's mother, is blonde Irish-Italian and looking exhausted. JIMMY and MISSY, Michael's little brother and sister, Swede's children, are both very blonde. Jimmy an active ten. Missy is six. Jimmy has a cat carrier with their cat in it. Missy has pillows. Michael and his mother struggle to carry a couch down the truck ramp. The little kids watch. 

MiCHAEL

You need to put it down a minute?

Lynn

No, I've got it. Let's just get this done. Jimmy, make sure you don't open that cage. We need to let Betsy get used to the place a few days before we let her out.

DiSSOLVE TO:

Int. Apartment kitchen - evening

Boxes all over, pizza boxes on the kitchen table, which seems too big for this little kitchen. Lynn is pouring sodas and passing them to the kids, who are sitting at the table.

LYNN

We'll set up the beds after we eat.

MisSY

Why did you sell mine?

LYNN

You get to sleep in with me. There's no space for your bed.

MISSY

I want my own room.

LYNN

Fine. You can have my room all to yourself. I'll sleep on the couch.

MicHAEL

No. Missy, stop being a brat. It's not Mama's fault she lost her job.

JimMY

Yeah, quit whining. Michael and I've always shared a room.

He turns to Lynn.

Jimmy (CONT'D)

Did you find out about soccer?

LyNN

Not yet.

JIMMY

I can ask at school tomorrow.

Lynn smiles a thank you at him, then turns to Michael.

LYNN

Tryouts for baseball will be in a few weeks, won't they? They'll want you on their team.

MICHAEL

Nah. You'll get a new job soon. I couldn't take care of the kids after school if I was playing.

diSSOLVE TO:

Int. Bar - nigHT

A neighborhood bar, no music, just a few small groups of people at tables. Lynn is at the bar by herself. She stares at the empty glass in her hand, shoulders slumped.

LESTER is also alone. He's clean and reasonably attractive in a cold or hard way, but he's on the puny side and has several tattoos. He comes over to Lynn, catches the attention of the BARTENDER, and gestures to Lynn's drink.

Lester

Another round for both of us.

Lynn glances at Lester as the bartender gets the drinks.

LYNN

Thanks.

LeSTER

I haven't seen you here before.

LYNN

I don't usually go to bars.

LESTER

Bad day?

LYNN

Got turned down for a job. Again.

LESTER

That's gotta be tough.

LYNN

Been looking for months. Thought it would be easier now it's spring.

LESTER

You'd think so... But I've been at the same place for years.

LYNN

So was my husband. I got a job before he died, but last hired is first fired when they cut back.

LESTER

You're on your own, then?

LYNN

With three kids.

LESTER

Three?

She nods and salutes him with her drink.

LYNN

Yep. So, thanks for the drink.

LESTER

What, you're brushing me off?

LYNN

Giving you an easy exit.

LESTER

What if I don't want an exit?

disSOLVE TO:

Int. Apartment kids' bedroom - day

Morning sun pouring into the crowded room through one small window with no curtain. Michael and Jimmy sit on twin beds. Michael reads a library book; Jimmy pets Betsy, the cat. Both are dressed for summer. Missy asleep, holding a stuffed dog, on an inflatable mattress on the floor. Cardboard boxes hold clothes, books, sports stuff, etc.

Footsteps come up the stairs and go to their mother's bedroom. A door shuts. Michael slaps shut the book and gets up abruptly. He's slept in his shorts and pulls on his Sac State sweatshirt. Now he's almost fifteen, it fits right.

MICHAEL

I'm not baby-sitting you kids all summer. Not for her to stay in bed with that man half the day.

JimMY

He works nights.

MICHAEL

Yeah, and Mama's not even trying to get a job anymore. She can get up and take care of her own kids.

JIMMY

I can take care of myself.

MICHAEL

Good. Take care of Missy, too, or tell Mama to take care of her.

JIMMY

Where are you going?

MICHAEL

Don't know. I'll be back tonight, after he goes to work.

disSOLVE TO:

Int. Apartment kITCHEN - evening

Michael wipes the table. Dirty dinner dishes are on the shelf. Lynn squirts dish washing liquid into a dishpan and starts filling it with water. Michael brings the dishcloth over and tosses it into the water. Lynn takes a prescription bottle out of her pocket and takes two pills.

MICHAEL

You shouldn't be taking Lester's prescription.

LYNN

Don't lecture me again. I need it for my back.

MICHAEL

Swede wouldn't stand by and say nothing about it.

LYNN

Swede's gone.

MICHAEL

(disgusted)

Now you've got Lester.

LYNN

If it weren't for him, you wouldn't be on the soccer team. He's paying the bills.

MICHAEL

I paid for my stuff myself!

LYNN

I know. I'm proud of how you worked so hard for everyone, doing all that yard work.

MICHAEL

And painting Mrs. Swenson's kitchen. The old busybody.

LYNN

But without Lester, I'd be working or out there looking. You'd have to watch the kids.

MICHAEL

He's not good enough for you.

Lynn gives him a hug, then pushes up her sleeves to wash the dishes. Michael stares at purple finger marks on her forearm and clenches his jaw. She glances up, sees Michael, and pushes her sleeves down. They stand staring at each other.

LyNN

You're right. I'll put his things by the door tonight.

diSSOLVE TO:

Int. apartment KIDS' BEDROOM - day

Michael, Jimmy, and Missy in bed. They wake up when footsteps stomp up the steps to their mother's bedroom. Michael jumps out of bed as Lester starts shouting.

LestER (O.S.)

What you think you're doing, woman? What's my stuff doing piled up by the door?

Michael' on his way out the door when Jimmy starts to follow.

Michael

You stay with Missy.

Jimmy looks at Missy. She's sitting, clinging to her stuffed dog, terrified. Betsy rubs against her.

JimMY

Holler if you need help. Come on up on my bed, Missy. Bring Betsy, before she pops that mattress.

Int. Apartment Lynn's bedroom - day

Lynn is sitting in bed, clutching the covers in front of her. Lester has a tight grip on her wrist, about to pull her off the bed when Michael bursts into the room. Lester glances up as Michael quickly crosses and grabs his wrist, hard.

MiCHAEL

Let go of her.

LesTER

This is between your mama and me. Get back to your room.

Michael squeezes tighter and leans into Lester's face. He's as big or bigger than the man and angry enough to kill. Lester holds on a few moments longer, then drops Lynn's wrist. Michael exhales and lets Lester shake off his hand.

LYNN

You need to leave, Lester.

LesTER

How will you pay the bills without me? This kid ever think of that?

MICHAEL

Get out.

He moves toward Lester aggressively and Lester looks ready to take him on.

LYNN

Go. Please.

She begs with her eyes. Lester puffs up and leaves.

disSOLVE TO:

Ext. High school soccer field stands - day

Michael is in the stands sitting between Missy and Jimmy, watching his high school soccer team miss a goal.

JIMMY

You would have had that.

MICHAEL

Yeah.

MissY

I'm bored.

JIMMY

Mama doesn't have a job yet. You gonna go out for basketball?

MichAEL

That would be saying I didn't think she could get a job. Besides, this way she can be out there looking.

SHENIA BROWN, an attractive sixteen-year-old African-American girl, walks by on her way to a group of girls. She stops by Missy to flirt.

Shenia

Hi, Michael.

MICHAEL

Hi, Shenia.

SHENIA

You're so nice to bring your little brother and sister to the game.

MICHAEL

Yeah, uh, this is Jimmy and Missy.

Shenia shakes hands with Missy, then reaches across Michael to shake hands with Jimmy. Michael is very aware of her breasts, inches in front of his face.

SHENIA

I'm Shenia.

Missy

You're the one Michael's always talking to on the phone?

Shenia smiles and winks at Missy.

SHENIA

I'm the only one, then?

MISSY

Yeah. He keeps telling Mama you're just a friend.

MiCHAEL

Missy, shut up.

Shenia laughs.

ShENIA

I'll talk to you later, Michael.

She heads on up to join her friends.

JimMY

She lives in that nice house near us, right?

MiCHAEL

Yeah.

JIMMY

Her dad's a cop. I've seen him leaving for work in uniform.

MICHAEL

Yeah.

MissY

How come their house is so much nicer than everyone else's?

MiCHAEL

They own it. Most everyone else around us rents.

MISSY

Even in the houses?

MICHAEL

Yeah.

MISSY

I wish we had a house.

MICHAEL

Be glad they haven't kicked us out of the apartment yet. We're way behind on the rent.